My day to day life is not very interesting.As the most people do everyday, I eat,learn ,play and sleep.In fact,I think that the simple and common life is very peaceful and comfortable.Even though I have owned what I want in my life,I never give up my dream of describing the life I desired.
The life I desired is full of health.Not only My body,but also the others'.In the future,I will work in a hospital,as an ordinary nurse ,look after the patients heart and soul,try my best to make them discovered.NObady will suffer from diseases,we all enjoy a healthy life.I'd like to be a candle,light myself ,and lighten others.
The life I disired is a life of peace.Our country is united,the world is harmonious,then I can embrace the strange friends from all over the world.we can hold hands together to celebrate the Olmpic Games.
If no disease invades us ,no war disturbs us ,I believe that tomorrow will be better!
This passage is writed for an English speaking competition,but I don't know wheather it's good or not.If you have looked this,can you tell me thereis anywrong with it .thank you
