Confidence is the first step to success
Television and newspaper
2008-02-13 01:25:50
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liubaobao
发布于2008-02-14 22:45:44
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To Monica,
I appreciate your help.
Now,I know I should improve my writing skills,in fact,I am doing this,especially,the structure.
I hope you often come to read my articles,and give me some suggestions.Okay?
Of course,I go to read yours as well.I,actually,do this every day.
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Monica1981
发布于2008-02-14 22:32:51
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Your English is Okay...just some tiny mistakes such as "on TV"not "in TV"....
But you need to improve your writing skills..
You read the question again (the firt sentence which you posted at the beginning of the article...)
Then you need to choose your argument side...
E.G. The TV can provide enought information like newspapers....then you give your supportive evidence...1,2,3...
Or you can say "The TV cannot provide as much infor. as newspapers...then you give your supportive evidence..1,2,3...
Read your final conclusion, you said: "Newspapers fail to be more impressive than TV."
Did the question ask you to prove this???
I think you have gone too far to answer your exam question...
For each individual paragraph, the first sentence should be bale to tell readers what you are going to write in this paragraph...
A clear structure of an article is very important...
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Monica1981
发布于2008-02-14 13:27:41
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I have not watched news and sports matches on TV for ages because my parents always occupy the TV.So I have to watch them on the Internet.
I can also watch matches Live on the Internet. (or I can also watch live sports matches on the Internet...)
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I will go through your articles later...but Brad has gone mental now since he is waiting me ready for dinner...we r going to have dinner in the French Cafe with other two lovers....so I catch up with you later.... ...
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liubaobao
发布于2008-02-14 01:42:09
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To Monica,
I get news on the Internet as well.
I have not gain news and sports match on TV for age,for my parents often watch it,so I have to acquire them on the Internet.
I can also watch matches through the Live on the Internet.
I said that watch TV to get news for answering the question of television and newspaper.
P.S.I hope you can give me some suggustions about my writing if you have some extra time,please.
More seriously more well.
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Monica1981
发布于2008-02-14 00:19:06
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I neither read Newspaper nor watch news on TV...
I get the latest news on the Internet, baby...21st century now...
But it is different in terms of sports...
Matches are not news...you need to watch it on TV..
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To downstairs,
You don;t call people especially guys "little boy" unless you think he is a naive, stupid little child or he has very small dick...
It is not very nice to say that to him...but since you are learing English, so you will get passed this time..
And you don;t say his English is good enough...
That means you are suggesting him "no need to learn any more"......not very wise, isn't it?
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lovealicebaby
发布于2008-02-13 15:33:52
- oh...little boy..i find ur english is good enough! u could write article like this kind, pretty gooooood!
