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Television and newspaper

2008-02-13 01:25:50

New Roman" size=4>Do you agree or disagreeIf you want to know some world events, you'd better read newspapers, because the television news doesn’t have enough information.

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As it was an indispensable match that Los Angeles Lakers competed with Phoenix Suns in NBA, it was appealing to me. Unfortunately, it is almost impossible to watch the matches on time, because I had classes while the match was going. I could choose to attain the outcome of the match from Sports channel on TV every evening after I came back home. It is a more convenient and faster way than reading newspaper. Therefore, it is more suitable to get news on TV.

 

First of all, TV is a great marriage of video and audio and this doesn’t exist in newspaper. Hence, I can receive the news far more immediately and directly than newspaper. If I expect to watch news, movies, articles and so forth on TV, all of which would make me feel excited. Sometimes, when we sit in front of TV, what we long for seeing are the wonderful performance of actors and actress, they bring some happiness to us or something mournful they occasionally. As a basketball amateur, I prefer to watch the news on TV instead of in newspaper. AS a reason, I can see clearly what happened to two teams the moment they were competing, such as who shot the ball into the nest, how the team defended the rivals successfully.

 

In addition, as a matter of fact, editors of newspaper use too many words, even big words, and some intricate sentences to describe a scene so that readers could hardly grasp what they are declaiming. In my memory, nobody is interested in looking up news words in dictionary, including English learners, I comprehend that it is the most tedious and monotonous task to recite new English words, especially the complex ones. TV hasn’t experienced embarrassment of this sort. For example, one minute of video can convey more than a thousand words and comperes of programs utilize easy words to report news so that audiences spend less time getting more information.

 

Furthermore, as no doubt, newspapers are less instantaneous than televisions. As the fast paces of humans all over the world, everyone urges to receive the latest news that he or she regards as useful and necessary ones. For instance, it is a good decision to know what happened in the election of the president of the U.S.A instantly from the television. As long as people who obtain news from newspapers, I would have to claim that they’d better accelerate their steps.

 

In conclusion, taking into account all these factors discussed above, the advantages of attaining news on TV carry more weight than reading newspaper. Nor is the television without its moments of colorful demonstrations and timely news.

 




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liubaobao 删除 liubaobao 发布于2008-02-14 22:45:44
To Monica,

I appreciate your help.

Now,I know I should improve my writing skills,in fact,I am doing this,especially,the structure.

I hope you often come to read my articles,and give me some suggestions.Okay?

Of course,I go to read yours as well.I,actually,do this every day.
Monica1981的个人空间 删除 Monica1981 发布于2008-02-14 22:32:51
Your English is Okay...just some tiny mistakes such as "on TV"not "in TV"....

But you need to improve your writing skills..

You read the question again (the firt sentence which you posted at the beginning of the article...)

Then you need to choose your argument side...

E.G. The TV can provide enought information like newspapers....then you give your supportive evidence...1,2,3...

Or you can say "The TV cannot provide as much infor. as newspapers...then you give your supportive evidence..1,2,3...

Read your final conclusion, you said: "Newspapers fail to be more impressive than TV."

Did the question ask you to prove this???

I think you have gone too far to answer your exam question...


For each individual paragraph, the first sentence should be bale to tell readers what you are going to write in this paragraph...

A clear structure of an article is very important...
Monica1981的个人空间 删除 Monica1981 发布于2008-02-14 13:27:41
I have not watched news and sports matches on TV for ages because my parents always occupy the TV.So I have to watch them on the Internet.

I can also watch matches Live on the Internet. (or I can also watch live sports matches on the Internet...)
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I will go through your articles later...but Brad has gone mental now since he is waiting me ready for dinner...we r going to have dinner in the French Cafe with other two lovers....so I catch up with you later.... ...
liubaobao 删除 liubaobao 发布于2008-02-14 01:42:09
To Monica,

I get news on the Internet as well.

I have not gain news and sports match on TV for age,for my parents often watch it,so I have to acquire them on the Internet.

I can also watch matches through the Live on the Internet.

I said that watch TV to get news for answering the question of television and newspaper.

P.S.I hope you can give me some suggustions about my writing if you have some extra time,please.

More seriously more well.
Monica1981的个人空间 删除 Monica1981 发布于2008-02-14 00:19:06
I neither read Newspaper nor watch news on TV...

I get the latest news on the Internet, baby...21st century now...

But it is different in terms of sports...

Matches are not news...you need to watch it on TV..
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To downstairs,

You don;t call people especially guys "little boy" unless you think he is a naive, stupid little child or he has very small dick...

It is not very nice to say that to him...but since you are learing English, so you will get passed this time..

And you don;t say his English is good enough...

That means you are suggesting him "no need to learn any more"......not very wise, isn't it?
Alice 删除 lovealicebaby 发布于2008-02-13 15:33:52
oh...little boy..i find ur english is good enough! u could write article like this kind, pretty gooooood!
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