my homework (1)

I try to upload my English homeworks and wish someone who is very good at English can point out the mistakes and correct them.                       

                              health and wealth

    When asked about the opinions toward which is more important bewteen health and wealth vary from person to person(opinion of health and wealth that which is more important,people respond differently).some one thinks that wealth is more important because of people can't live well without it.While there are many other people argue that health should be the No.1 in one's life.

    It goes without any questions that wealth plays a key role in our lifes.Society is seemed to be a economic one(society).Everything(Anything) could't go well without money.We must pay for a variety of things that we need to do or to own.For instance,living in a comfortable house,having your personal pleasure time,nurturing the offspring and the like.In another side,health is also an indispensable part of life,as many people will admit.An effort to gain a huge wealth may mean a burdened job and  a time-pressed life which may destroyed our health(A huge wealth may mean the burden of career and live a time-pressed life thay may destroyed our health).Healthy body is the basis of revolution(括号外是自己翻译的,The body is the revolutionary qualification 这句是网上找的^-^).A good health also mean that we have enough power to earn our good lifes.

   In my perception about health and wealth that they are not in opposition to each other.Rather ,they can enhance each other so that one's life could become better and better.Not only do we desire to possess bundant wealth,but also we value it more that a good health is the best wealth(Either a plentful wealth we need,or a good health we want also.The good health is the best wealth).

I was writting it with a good feeling,but when finishde it,I got into confusion.I found it was Chinglish,but I didn't how to correct it.Someone hele me!

紫色为一些朋友帮助改过的错误和认为教好的,红色为原来自己写的.有空在继续改!