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I am the God of myself.Maybe I can be influnced by others;maybe I can changed a little by others;But I have to admit that I must try to be myself and that I can not be slaved by anybody else.Otherwise,It's meaningless for me to survive in this world.I AM THE GOD OF MYSELF!!!
  • a copy

    2007-06-15 09:39:17

    There are people who are wise:

    who are self-confident:

    who are fast in speed:

    who are exploring nature:

  • I have the english blog of myself

    2007-06-15 09:32:08

     try to upload my English homework and wish someone who is very good at English could point out the mistakes and correct them.                      

                                  health and wealth

        When asked which is more important,health or wealth,different people respond differently.someone thinks that wealth is more important because people can't live well without it.Meanwhile, there are many other people arguing that health should be the No.1 in one's life.

        It goes without any doubt that wealth plays a key role in our lives.Society seems to be an economic one.Nothing could go well without money.We must pay for a variety of things that we need to do or  own.For instance,living in a comfortable house,having your personal pleasant time,nurturing our offspring and hobbies.
        On another side,health is also an indispensable part of life,as many people will have to admit.Huge wealth may mean the burden of career and living a time-pressed life that may destroy our health.A healthy body is the revolutionary qualification .A good health also means that we have enough power to earn our good life.

       In my perception about health and wealth  they are not opposite but closely connected to each other.Moreover ,they can enhance each other so that one's life could become better and better.Not only do we desire to possess bundant wealth,but also we value it more that a good health is the best wealth.

     (I just try to correct your writting without changing your structure of the article and sentences.I am not sure whether it is perfect,but I believe it will help you to pass your exam.)

     

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