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        New Roman">As is depicted in the above picture, we can see that the woman employee makes a lie to the man employer. She promises that she will never be married, yet she already has a child hiding in her skirt. From the man’s smiling and his strong vigor to hire this woman, we may draw a conclusion that there exists some unfair phenomenon in the company’s employing principles. The picture clearly reveals that women are discriminated by the work companies and their unwillingness of struggle and suffering.

       There are many reasons explaining why women have to hide their truly situations when facing up with the people belong in the human recourse department of the company. Firstly, employers always took women’s application for granted that they are not wise or smart than men in the same field of the same degree, especially when a woman is married. Secondly, in most of the surroundings, a woman couldn’t find the job or even the chance of the interview if she doesn’t hide the truth that she is married. Despite all these factors, the relationship between the employer and the woman employee meets with some difficulties in our society nowadays.

       Considering all the reasons, we can learn and find some ways to solve this tough and puzzled problem efficiently. On one hand, employers should pay much attention on the woman’s situation fairly while not only judging their ability by their appearances. On the other hand, women employees need to change the dishonest way and talk to the employer sincerely with the truth and later use your ability to earn the respectable from your boss that you are fit to this job. Undoubtedly, it is high time to encourage the government’s endeavor to help women and communicate with the employer.