An argument with my best friend

2008-01-12 21:15:44

An argument with my best friend

New Roman">Today I GOTup early, because my friend and I DECIDED that we were going to play on the playground. This is a very EXCITING idea.
The weather WAS fine and birds SANG happily. we were DELIGHTED too.Soon,we arrived the playground.We want to relax Ourselves.But there was something to happen.When we were playing , My wallet was stolen.It was very angry and sad.My feel was bad.At that time,everything went wrong.Then my friend said that you did not think about it,although it was happening,you should be do the better,Don’t angry and sad,you still have me. Let’s relax,ok?

I WAS very angry at that time... So I ARGUED with my friend.
we were quarrel with each other.This was my first time argument with my friend,it’s very bad,I saw shadows over my head.In fact,I didn’t want to argument with my friend,she is my best friend.And I know she is good to me.But I didn’t know how am I and what am I happened.

In short,I didn't have a nice day.It is very bad for me.Do you think so?Am I do right?

Oh…my god. Today was my worst day in the life.

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删除 kathy525 发布于2008-01-15 18:19:39: Today, I get up early .because my friend and I decision that we will going to playground,this is very excited idea.
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Today I GOTup early, because my friend and I DECIDED that we were going to play on the playground. This is a very EXCITING idea.

The weather is fine and birds are in the happy singing.My friend and I are feeling happy,too.
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The weather WAS fine and birds SANG happily. we were DELIGHTED too.

My wallet was stolen.It is very angry and sad.
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My wallet was stolen(on the PLAYGROUND????). I(not IT was very angry and sad.

No,No…I am very angry now,How to relax myself?So,I am argument with my friend,we are quarrel with each other.
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I WAS very angry at that time... So I ARGUED with my friend.

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Andway, you are trying to write in English. But remember when you tell a story, past tenses are often used, because you are telling about something happened in the past.

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