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The Last Visit

2008-02-29 11:37:50 / 个人分类:memory

It's been a long time I didn't hang out with my friends since I came to work in seaworld.

Many of us have changed a job and work in different district, making it difficult to have a get-together. Anyway, it’s great that many have found their Mr right or Miss right.

I had a happy time with my friends in the past 2 years, visiting many amazing places, climbing mountains (my favorite sport), and we felt so close to the nature.

I miss you guys, and I will never forget the landscape we enjoyed, so nice and precious.

Last March, we went to XianHu Vivarium, LuoHu District, it was so beautiful that you can’t miss it if you come to ShenZhen. It’s worth visiting, trust me.

Here are some pics I took in XianHu vivarium to share with you guys.

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P.S: finaly thank "ydzeng" for pointing out my mistake.thanks!




TAG: memory lovealicebaby

Alice 删除 lovealicebaby 发布于2008-03-01 10:49:25
TO: wo98100

u r welcome. learn to each other. i believe u could do well.

hmmmmmm.....there're two pictures in my album, i think u may know which am i. ( long hair)
秘密大男孩的个人空间 删除 wo98100 发布于2008-03-01 10:19:12
What a woderful trip it is!How beautiful the picture are!The pity is i don't know which one is you !haha really,keep in touch ,i will write more in the future!i will work hard ,thank you for your support!
Daniel Tsang 删除 ydzeng 发布于2008-02-29 18:48:06
No worries !!!  XDDDDD
Alice 删除 lovealicebaby 发布于2008-02-29 13:34:11
Occasionally, I came across a message left by Monica about writing. She said we should use the least words to write clearly.
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I often come to Monica's Blog. sometimes i just read. i feel u all write very well, but i don't know how to make up the sentence.i would read more actricle ur write. I have confidence to write well.
Alice 删除 lovealicebaby 发布于2008-02-29 13:23:33
To: ydzeng

thanks a million! i can't imagine one could help me point the mistakes out. I feel comfortable to read u wrote. I will put them right.

Honestly, i'm eager to get ur guidance about my english. then, i could be better and better.
Alice 删除 lovealicebaby 发布于2008-02-29 13:15:53
To: Ana

thanks very much! but i think looks like mature now. i miss my long hair.
Daniel Tsang 删除 ydzeng 发布于2008-02-29 13:03:24
wow, thank you for sharing with us those wonderful pics...but after reading this post i got some suggestions on your english writing...well, just take it for reference, cuz what i am saying may not be right.

As to the title," the last visit" is OK.

here are some changes to the body:

It's been a long time I didn't hang out with my friends since I came to work in seaworld.

Many of us have changed a job and work in different district, making it difficult to have a get-together. Anyway, it’s great that many have found their Mr right or Miss right.

I had a happy time with my friends in the past 2 years, visiting many amazing places, climbing mountains (my favorite sport), and we felt so close to the nature.

I miss you guys, and I will never forget the landscape we enjoyed, so nice and precious.

Last March, we went to XianHu Vivarium, LuoHu District, it was so beautiful that you can’t miss it if you come to ShenZhen. It’s worth visiting, trust me.

Here are some pics I took in XianHu vivarium to share with you guys.
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Occasionally, I came across a message left by Monica about writing. She said we should use the least words to write clearly.

Honestly, I have no business telling you how you should write, and I am not doing a good job, please just take it for reference, maybe some of them can be a little bit helpful.
Ana 删除 安娜 发布于2008-02-29 12:19:39
You are very sweet in the photos.
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