Writing Task 3 Writing a Story

it happened last year.i rember it was november and that day was very cold.

when i came clasroom.my teacher hasn't came in.so i started to play PSP.but when class was beginning i still played .i think i was so indulging in the game that i forgot it was on class.suddenly, a voice came into my ears.doctor found my psp and he planed to confiscate it .he asked teacher yang to call my father for my breaking .i still unhappy now when i remember it.

but thank goodness,ELI helped me and nothing serious.thank you ,ELI.