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Enjoy life and love life, love people around me!(please be frank to tell me that what mistakes i have made and collect it. please tell me how much good or bad the paragraphs i write are. Thank all people for coming to my space and welcome all people leaving advice to me. advice is the passion of writing this space of me. thank you!)

love letter to wrong people

2008-04-30 09:00:14 / 天气: 舒适 / 心情: 平静 / 个人分类:love

'ring....' the telephone rang. SUE hesitated for a minute and took the transmitter/receiver, 'hello?'

'is that SUE? this is CHEN.'

'it's you? I have written it down.'

'really? I really appreciate that! how could I get it?'

SUE lightly bited her lip and hesitated for a few minutes, finally said,'I speak , you write.'

SUE put down the phone then opened the drawer from which she took a diary out .

it was sunny outside, sue's head went blank, nearly fainted. the thin diary book seemed to weigh thousand KG, somehow she couldn't get to that page.

SUE mumbled, needn't be so, what would get? be cool!....

'I really don't know how much what you write will touch people? HAHA, I certainly will make it.' CHEN's familiar bright laughter made sue feel her heart trembling.

turned to that page in the end. sue looked at the blank page and read,

dear ANE, i don't know why what i say drop to your hands. FIRSTLY, i only want it to be near my pillow, accompany me evry night when i am sleeping. AS It is not so submissive and it is so submissive, it only run to you not others. please accept it and be its master. i think this is its choice and let it sleep with you.

' wow, you are so great! how can you get so good words!!! you are really Li qingzhao was born again.' CHEN often speaks without thinking in front of SUE. His praise often let her fly while his sarcasm put her feet on the ground, just don't say ' i love you to death.'

 to be continued...

sue smiled without giving voice. chen is acting like a child , although she is younger than him, she is more like his elder sister than his younge sister. no, fuck, she help and protect him from everythging she know. sometiems, chen would like to show his hero image, she would show weak of her and chen would feel comfortable, but they often blame each other and laugh after it.

'shut up, listen to me.( i am a real sucker, so when i saw you, i believed you. I couldn't know how much i love you. the feeling i love you sometimes show high and sometimes show low. sometimes i think, in fact, there is no excuse to have it, if i could stop loving you, eveything will be ok.)

after a few minutes of silence, CHEN said again,'you are really something! leave somebody at large in order to apprehend him afterwards, an expert in loveing area! To tell the truth, how many men admire you? hahaha...'

to be continued..

 

 

 




TAG: love

灵感源于勤奋 删除 janeyuan 发布于2008-05-12 16:06:36
thank you for your kind suggestions.
it is really useful for me.
i am glad to read it.
Daniel Tsang 删除 ydzeng 发布于2008-05-10 19:26:44
oops, it should be Jan's  and Feb's Issues ...
Daniel Tsang 删除 ydzeng 发布于2008-05-10 19:20:23
Hi, Jane, so nice to read the story, you really did a great job to be honest. Actually I like writing stories too while I am idle (cuz it's time-consuming, and inspiration-driven)

" Shoes and motorcycles" (1) and (2) were fictions that I tried to wrote months ago, which you can check out in my Dec and Jan 's issues.

Meanwhile I would like to share my views on this aricle , just take them for reference...


'really? I am grateful to it! how to give it to me?
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" really? I really apprecate that, show me"

SUE slightly bited her lip and thought for a long time, finally said,'I speak it out, you write it down.'
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Sue slight bited her lip and thought for a while, " I speak, you write."  ( "a long time" is not that suitable, and " I speak, you write" is more like oral english )

SUE put the transmitter down and opened the drawer then took the diary book out of the drawer.
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Sue hung up the phone, then opened the drawer from which she took out a diary"  (diary 可以指日记本)

there was nothing in sue's head, she nearly fainted.
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her head went blank, nearly fainted.

SUE mumbled, needn't be so, what would get? be calm!....
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Sue mumbled, " do i have to, what if.... no, be cool...."

you are really Li qingzhao was born again
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you are really a live Li qingzhao

HE often praise her to the sky and speak sarcastically to earth just don't say ' i love you to death.'
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His praise often let her fly, while his sarcasm put her feet on the ground.....   "  I love you till I died" ( Don't understand very well what you were trying to say, just try to make it sound better )

i am a child that easily be kidded
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I am a real sucker . (a sucker is someone who believes people who lie to her, and can be easily tricked)

And I can't follow you very well in the last two paragraghs.

Keep going !!
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