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Enjoy life and love life, love people around me!(please be frank to tell me that what mistakes i have made and collect it. please tell me how much good or bad the paragraphs i write are. Thank all people for coming to my space and welcome all people leaving advice to me. advice is the passion of writing this space of me. thank you!)
love letter to wrong people
2008-04-30 09:00:14 / 天气: 舒适 / 心情: 平静 / 个人分类:love
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janeyuan
发布于2008-05-12 16:06:36
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thank you for your kind suggestions.
it is really useful for me.
i am glad to read it.
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ydzeng
发布于2008-05-10 19:20:23
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Hi, Jane, so nice to read the story, you really did a great job to be honest. Actually I like writing stories too while I am idle (cuz it's time-consuming, and inspiration-driven)
" Shoes and motorcycles" (1) and (2) were fictions that I tried to wrote months ago, which you can check out in my Dec and Jan 's issues.
Meanwhile I would like to share my views on this aricle , just take them for reference...
'really? I am grateful to it! how to give it to me?
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" really? I really apprecate that, show me"
SUE slightly bited her lip and thought for a long time, finally said,'I speak it out, you write it down.'
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Sue slight bited her lip and thought for a while, " I speak, you write." ( "a long time" is not that suitable, and " I speak, you write" is more like oral english )
SUE put the transmitter down and opened the drawer then took the diary book out of the drawer.
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Sue hung up the phone, then opened the drawer from which she took out a diary" (diary 可以指日记本)
there was nothing in sue's head, she nearly fainted.
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her head went blank, nearly fainted.
SUE mumbled, needn't be so, what would get? be calm!....
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Sue mumbled, " do i have to, what if.... no, be cool...."
you are really Li qingzhao was born again
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you are really a live Li qingzhao
HE often praise her to the sky and speak sarcastically to earth just don't say ' i love you to death.'
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His praise often let her fly, while his sarcasm put her feet on the ground..... " I love you till I died" ( Don't understand very well what you were trying to say, just try to make it sound better )
i am a child that easily be kidded
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I am a real sucker . (a sucker is someone who believes people who lie to her, and can be easily tricked)
And I can't follow you very well in the last two paragraghs.
Keep going !!

