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climbing mountain

2008-05-02 15:23:35 / 个人分类:something

yesterday was may day. we had only one day off.

my roommate and her senior high school classmates ( three young boys and a girl and the girl's husband) and i went to climbing mountain in a garden in this town.

i had thought of what i would do in may day for nearly a week before may day came.

I didn't make the decision until the day before may day.

the night before, a colleague asked me to go to the green world, but he was a boy and no others would go to with us. in the end, I told him that i couldn't go out with him.

my roommate has a lot of classmates here. when there is one day off or more, she often go out with them.

on may day morning, when she asked me what i would do that day. I told her that i had nothing in mind, so she asked me to go with them.

I got up with her.

before we set out, it rained a little, but later it was windy all day. we had worried more about our dress. Finally, she weared a pair of pants and a short-sleeved sweater and I weared a suit of skirt.

at first, my roommate and i bought some food in a supermarket that if you bought ten yuan of things, you would get a 1.5ml 恰宝水. I spent twenty-seven yuan and got a bottle of water then we got into a bus to find other people.

after half an hour, we met three young boys, one in black T-shirt and balck jeans, one in white T-shirt and light-green jeans, one in bright-blue T-shirt with whitle short-sleeves and gray jeans. The bright-blue is very handsome and lovable.

after it, we went to the girl's family. she was combing her hair.

half an hour later, we were in a little restaurant and eating something. the girl and i were eating noodle, others were eating four plates of dumpling. hehe...

we got into the bus and arrived the destination after fourty minutes. all of us were in high spirits.

when we got off the bus, the first thing caught our sight was a bus that take you to the foot of the mountain if you are willing to pay five yuan.

we all thought that we wanted to climbing just because we wanted to breathe fresh air and relax ourselves. we didn't see that bus any more from the first sight.

we all walked half an hour to get the foot of that mountain.

on the way , first we met a stream and we all washed our hands and face in it. the water in it is very cool.

then we met a archway, first we thought we should go through this archway.  we found we were wrong aften ten minutes' walk and we saw cucumbers on the cucumber trees. i wanted to touch the cucumbers. the bright-blue boy pretended that he really wanted to get a cucumber. the girl blamed him.

the third thing we met was a temple and we went into it to see what happened in it.

first i told that we bought some food and put it in my packbag. the bag was really heavy. but at first no boy helped me to carry it and i was shy to ask them to help me. it was lucky that when i felt tired, the bright-blue boy helped me. on the way, the other boys played jokes on him and he just smiled. though i couldn't understand what they were saying at that moment, i knew they were laugh at him that if he had a crush on me?

after the temple, we chose to walk along a stream and there WERE fish in it. the bright-blue went close to the stream and grasped fish. hehe...

then we began climbing.

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sophia(pink)的个人空间 删除 sophia(pink) 发布于2008-05-06 17:50:14
Yeah! I agree with haihaibs! But I also like your other articles!
All the best!
灵感源于勤奋 删除 janeyuan 发布于2008-05-03 08:06:27
to haihaibs,
thank you very much. i like your composition.
i just want to practice my english and want to write more and share something that happened to me.
it's my pleasure that you come here.
thank you for your advice. good to know it.
i will try to do it well.
haihaibs  蓝绿屋 No pain no gain 删除 haihaibs 发布于2008-05-02 16:51:50
If I may say so, a good essay is one containing something special, interesting and important, but not all things.

You are supposed to give prominence to the key points and your main ideas, not to speak one two three four five, but speak five if you think it's important and interesting.

If I offend you, forgive me,please.
Good luck to you.
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